Nice you hit front page lol
Nice effort it made out to be quite the lengthy flash lol. Only thing I would look out for would be inconsistency in style and drawings. Some shots are a lot more detailed then others while others just have too much blank space. Do you story board your movies? That helps a lot with the composition side. I'd go into more detail but it looks like that Zhanli guy below me has already got it covered lol. Well no need for any more advice, your going to pick this all up from college anyways lol. Damn college is prolonging me from doing any work on flash haha