alright concept
The animation was alright but the audio wasn't up to par. There was no enthusiasm and the music was just a quiet 8-bit background song playing through the whole thing. For animations like this its better to have really good audio instead of animation. I'll use egoraptor as an example. When he started off he didn't have good animation but he did really well on the audio side. I suggest getting some voice actors if you choose to continue in these types of animation.